Completely dressed in white,
they enter in the crowd's field of sight,
A roar resounds all around the stadium,
right into the captain's ear drums,
The cheers of the fans make his heart race,
and slowly, tears trickle down his face,
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| Real Madrid legend, Raul Gonzalez |
to captain his favourite team,
and now he's there,
with his supporter's chants in the air,
raising him to wild heights,
his heart ignites,
and he remembers as a kid,
singing, "Hala Madrid!"
in the very same stadium
I was inspired to write this poem when I heard Real Madrid fans chanting "Hala Madrid!" which translated means, "Hail Madrid!". Writing this poem I thought about the feelings that a player haas when entering a stadium full of loving fans, singing your name to the sky. And so I decided to put it in the perspective of the legendary Real Madrid captain, Raul Gonalez. I tried to write the entirety of the poem in an aabbccddeeffggh rhyme scheme, but there are a couple of times where maybe it doesn't sound as perfect as it could.
Nice poem, but there are a few rhyming errors, for example stadium and drums. Overall a good job though.
ReplyDeleteGood work niccolo. I like how you incorporated the soccer player's childhood with his present feeling of being on the soccer field. You've really brought the feel of a live stadium into your poem. (A roar resounds all around the stadium,
ReplyDeleteright into the captain's ear drums) Great poem.
Niccolo! this poem is really inspirational. i could just see everybody chanting his name in the stadium. what a great feeling. great job!
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem but there are 2 errors ehich are
ReplyDelete1- long sentences with short ones
2- rhyming mistakes which were 2
But otherwise wonderful job keep it up